Hi, my name is Emma. I live in Christchurch. I go to Yaldhurst model school my favorite subject is writing and art. I've got one horse a dog and a cat, fish, rabbits, and lambs.
My cat goe's hunting at night because when mum found him. My cat was a wild kitten. He had no food at all and gran's friend found him and fed him.
My dog can jump through a holla hoop. My dog is very fluffy. she was a wild puppy too. She was fake pregnant. she was supposed to have puppies.
I am eight. my best friend is takira and my other friend is Olivia. I have a sister and a brother my sister's name is Laura and my brother's name is Gus. I can get a goal when I play netball but I play netball with my sister at home.
My favorite sport is horse riding and netball, running. My grandad is the best grandad in the world he is my favorite person in the world. I love mother nature. I love butterflies.
My favorite tv show is shortland street and home, away. my favorite bird is a fantail.
I love playing with balls.
I am a student at Yaldhurst Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 19 September 2018
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Hello Emma. I really love how you have used paragraphs in your blog post. It is really interesting that originally both your cat and dog were rescued from the wild. What is your favourite animal out of all of your pets? Well done on a great first post! From Te MÄhuri 2.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Emma, it's Julia from Rimu Class.
ReplyDeleteI really like this post. It gives me an awesome insight into your interests and other things that you enjoy watching/doing with family.
Maybe next time you could use different websites to create something with more pop of colour. Apart from that, great job.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Emma Its Bridget From Rimu class.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have said what you like to do and what you do do in your free time.Next time you could make a slide or something bright and coulourful.
Great job.
Kia Ora Emma, Im Maddie a year six from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteThis post is amazing! I cant believe that this is your first post and I love all the detail that you added in WOW! your writing skills are almost flawless and its still only your first post. I think that you could add in a little bit of color but i'm still shocked. maybe next time you could find a new way to present one of my favorites are canva, piktochart, and google slides have fun creating and hopefully you will learn lots of new skills I hope your writing skills get better and better.
Kind Regards Maddison from YMS.